Your front cover is very good, i like the feature article photo its effective and is technical with the double image makes the picture stand out. The masthead is bold and would appeal to teenagers which is clearly your target audience. The overall background colour ties in well with your pictures and the contrast between your captions and the background text make the the magazine stand out. The use of puffs is clearly shown and will dore in your target audience. Furthermore, puffs can evidently be seen aswell. The maincover line however needs to be more bolder and stand out as a main cover line. Overall its a good magazine front cover could maybe have a little more colour involved.
The front cover is good, the multiple pictures around the articles are effective as you can tell which icture is achored to the cover lines. the masthead stands out and with the logo type picture next to it helps link it, the cover lines would be hard to find if the pictures werent there. the plugs used show that you are targeting a certain audience with the chances to win big caption, overall i like the front cover but could use more colour but i like the use of the pictures used.
The mast head is bold but needs to be bigger for it to attract the audience. The feature article photo it’s not as big as most music magazines would have it to attract the audience. The main cover line also needs to be bigger as its one of the most important things along with the feature article photo as it’s the factors that make the magazine stand out from other magazines. The background colour goes with your photos well. Your plugs and puffs are easy and clear to read. Overall there could be a chance of improvement.
With the consistency of 'using more colour' in both comments so far, i will add some more colour to my magazine and make some changes according to the feedback.
Your front cover is very good, i like the feature article photo its effective and is technical with the double image makes the picture stand out. The masthead is bold and would appeal to teenagers which is clearly your target audience. The overall background colour ties in well with your pictures and the contrast between your captions and the background text make the the magazine stand out. The use of puffs is clearly shown and will dore in your target audience. Furthermore, puffs can evidently be seen aswell. The maincover line however needs to be more bolder and stand out as a main cover line. Overall its a good magazine front cover could maybe have a little more colour involved.
ReplyDeleteI'm fairly pleased with the comment from 'hicksey' and can use the constructive criticism to improve my magazine based on this information.
ReplyDeleteThe front cover is good, the multiple pictures around the articles are effective as you can tell which icture is achored to the cover lines. the masthead stands out and with the logo type picture next to it helps link it, the cover lines would be hard to find if the pictures werent there. the plugs used show that you are targeting a certain audience with the chances to win big caption, overall i like the front cover but could use more colour but i like the use of the pictures used.
ReplyDeleteThe mast head is bold but needs to be bigger for it to attract the audience. The feature article photo it’s not as big as most music magazines would have it to attract the audience. The main cover line also needs to be bigger as its one of the most important things along with the feature article photo as it’s the factors that make the magazine stand out from other magazines. The background colour goes with your photos well. Your plugs and puffs are easy and clear to read. Overall there could be a chance of improvement.
ReplyDeleteWith the consistency of 'using more colour' in both comments so far, i will add some more colour to my magazine and make some changes according to the feedback.
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